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Contestants - Poofread your Andaree

Blog Posted:4/29/2024 12:14:00 AM


I finally looked at the submissions to my Andaree contest. About 8 or 10 poems have not followed all the rules. These are the rules not followed: middle word must also appear in the title/ last line needs to be a repeat of line 1/ some rhymes and syllables are off. Near rhymes don't count/ grammar is important. Sometimes I see an adjective used as a noun or some other weird phrasings. I hope to finish up my contest in the morning during the time of my husband's colonoscopy. I will probably be at the hospital with an hour to finish up. I need to be strict on my Andaree form's rules, so if they are not followed, I will have to give N/A. One or two grammar or punctuation mistake won't get you an N/A, but you won't score as high. I love poetry that is beautiful or that states something profound in a lucid way. Well, that's all. Hope you catch my blog if you are someone whose poem needs revision. Quote by Andrea Dietrich

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Fierce Andaree

The silent moon veiled in seamless web darkness.
Bejeweled in radiance starkness,
Youthful valiant Prince Harkness.
Lost in hush briefness.
Charming, brave.
Fierce.
His, a fave.
Diligence, briskness
Each breath struck by its broadness.
Shadow soldiers walk with such braveness.
The silent moon veiled in seamless web darkness.

4/22/2024
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June 28, 2024 at 10:03 AM
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June 28, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Eve , I like your imagery. I guess I omitted another rule from my explanatory post you put above. The middle word must also rhyme with lines 4 and 8. I will check my form to be sure of that. I appreciate your effort in writing an Andaree.
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