Fields of Blazing Stars

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By your ink on this parchment, my thoughts tattooed
I'm drawn to this bouquet; I am left so madly.
Fields of blazing stars, lying randomly, strewed

Happiest are these thoughts deliberately construed.
Winter taking them from my core destroys me, sadly.
By your ink on this parchment, my thoughts tattooed

Purple pillars of violently swaying happiness imbue
So I harvest them as fast as I can, enjoying them gladly.
Fields of blazing stars, lying randomly, strewed

After such a long time between blossoms, histories accrued.
I waited patiently for their replacement, so very badly.
By your ink on this parchment, my thoughts tattooed

I felt the truest of forlorn, nearly left lifelessly blued.
Springtime rain brought them back to my welcoming hands, comradely.
Fields of blazing stars, lying randomly, strewed

Once I found eyes on them, new happiness did exude.
Replenishing their hearts energy regrown in me
By your ink on this parchment, my thoughts tattooed
Fields of blazing stars, lying randomly, strewed

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Date: 2/16/2024 9:16:00 AM
A beautiful villanelle! The picture works well too with your poem. Spring lives in your soul as you wait for the blossomings that signal winter's end. Gorgeous.
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Date: 2/16/2024 9:39:00 AM
:) Happy Friday, Just having coffee enjoying a sub-zero day in Minnesota. All the while having springtime thoughts. Warmest Regards A.S.
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