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Field of Dreams

Shooting stars streak through The sky like God sprinkling seeds Into the nights soil Received 4th place in "Only Nature Allowed" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2011 1:41:00 PM

Did I ever tell you I am from Iowa, but I never even got to ever see Field of Dreams.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 12:10:00 PM

I loved this one. Congratulations!!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/19/2011 11:57:00 AM

Love the imagery. My congrats to you, Susan : )

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/19/2011 10:56:00 AM

This is beautiful Susan, congratulations on your win :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2011 5:07:00 AM

Congratulations Susan on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2011 9:58:00 PM

wow, this is amazing senryu imagery, Susan. Sorry can't see more tonight. HOpefully tomorrow. I am going to get off very soon! goodnight. lUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2011 7:45:00 PM

Congrats Susan on another fantastic win in the contest with this fabulous piece luv...

Amanda Moore

Date: 7/17/2011 6:59:00 PM

Great imagery I would love to really see a sky just like this!

Amanda Moore

Date: 7/17/2011 6:59:00 PM

Great imagery I would love to really see a sky just like this!

Amanda Moore

Date: 7/17/2011 6:58:00 PM

Great imagery I would love to really see a sky just like this!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 6:52:00 PM

Beautiful and lovely take on the contest, gooduck, Susan

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/17/2011 3:04:00 PM

stunningly beautiful Susan.. good luck in the contest luv..