Field of Dreams

Shooting stars streak through
The sky like God sprinkling seeds 
Into the nights soil


Received 4th place in "Only Nature Allowed" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Did I ever tell you I am from Iowa, but I never even got to ever see Field of Dreams.
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July 22, 2011 at 12:10 PM
I loved this one. Congratulations!!
Horne Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Love the imagery. My congrats to you, Susan : )
Neels Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 10:56 AM
This is beautiful Susan, congratulations on your win :-)
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:07 AM
Congratulations Susan on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 9:58 PM
wow, this is amazing senryu imagery, Susan. Sorry can't see more tonight. HOpefully tomorrow. I am going to get off very soon! goodnight. lUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:45 PM
Congrats Susan on another fantastic win in the contest with this fabulous piece luv...
Moore Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Great imagery I would love to really see a sky just like this!
Moore Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Great imagery I would love to really see a sky just like this!
Moore Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Great imagery I would love to really see a sky just like this!
Mehta Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Beautiful and lovely take on the contest, gooduck, Susan
Sweetheart Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 3:04 PM
stunningly beautiful Susan.. good luck in the contest luv..
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