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Field of Daisies

Worshiping the sun,
Extended extremities;
Maidens of the field.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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May 21, 2009 at 8:01 AM

Your verbal dexterity now encompasses the haiku, I see. Bravo

May 18, 2009 at 11:33 PM

This field is pure and precious. Maidens is a nice name for them.

May 15, 2009 at 8:34 AM

They are indeed Raul.Thanks you for favouring me with a Hon Men in your contest an honour I value greatly from such a talented imgist as you.Have a good weeknd.Rgds Brian

Kristin Reynolds

May 15, 2009 at 3:27 AM

I LOVE daisies. this is beautiful, Raul. love, Kristin love that last line. :)

May 14, 2009 at 5:43 PM

Oh! Raul, this is just simply magical elegance here, I love this so much, must go to my favs.

Carolyn Devonshire

May 14, 2009 at 2:55 PM

Captivating image, Raul! Love those beautiful sun worshipers. Love, carolyn

May 14, 2009 at 2:21 PM

Also the word daisy is derived from two words-day and eye, because if fully closes around its head at night and opens in the day. Great haiku Raul-AA

May 14, 2009 at 9:13 AM

love the "maidens of the field" great right

May 14, 2009 at 7:41 AM

Love the personification here. Almost makes me feel guilty for wanting to run through this field! Awesome! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

May 14, 2009 at 7:08 AM

Ummmmm may I pick a bouquet??? Please?

Charmaine Chircop

May 14, 2009 at 5:20 AM

i love your field of daisies--the maidens of the fields-----charma

Christopher Higgins

May 14, 2009 at 4:52 AM

You have written some beautiful haiku..this one is also brilliant...good work.

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