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Field of Daisies

Worshiping the sun, Extended extremities; Maidens of the field.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:01:00 AM

Your verbal dexterity now encompasses the haiku, I see. Bravo

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:33:00 PM

This field is pure and precious. Maidens is a nice name for them.

Brian Strand

Date: 5/15/2009 8:34:00 AM

They are indeed Raul.Thanks you for favouring me with a Hon Men in your contest an honour I value greatly from such a talented imgist as you.Have a good weeknd.Rgds Brian

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/15/2009 3:27:00 AM

I LOVE daisies. this is beautiful, Raul. love, Kristin love that last line. :)

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/14/2009 5:43:00 PM

Oh! Raul, this is just simply magical elegance here, I love this so much, must go to my favs.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/14/2009 2:55:00 PM

Captivating image, Raul! Love those beautiful sun worshipers. Love, carolyn

Sandra Hudson

Date: 5/14/2009 2:21:00 PM

Also the word daisy is derived from two words-day and eye, because if fully closes around its head at night and opens in the day. Great haiku Raul-AA

James Faulkner

Date: 5/14/2009 9:13:00 AM

love the "maidens of the field" great right

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/14/2009 7:41:00 AM

Love the personification here. Almost makes me feel guilty for wanting to run through this field! Awesome! Love, Shar