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Field Before the Gates

Young tears combat pain, Yielding not to fear. Ominous whispers echo, Overwhelming all sound. Unanimated shells reflect, Upward bound hopes. Resting in frozen agony, Remembering someone. Departed from families, Drained of dear friends. Empty hearts, not of love, Eternal joy still a glimmer. Air released in final breath, All hurt becomes numb. Dire thoughts fade to black, Deity, march down the honor guide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/8/2010 6:58:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:49:00 PM
Nice work, keep em coming.
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:40:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Michael. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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