Field

It's almost as if,
it's this constant rhythm.
My mind is grazing
across a field,
searching in places
I've never acknowledged.
Times changing for a second
towards what is to become.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 1, 2026 at 7:31 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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May 6, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Roberto Cruz, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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April 26, 2016 at 5:50 PM
roberto cruz, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. Always ~LINDA~
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February 19, 2013 at 6:47 PM
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