Debbie Guzzi Poet Couplet

Fidgety Spring

Wiggly squirmy fidgety Spring
The robin’s worms the crawling things.

A swarm of ladybugs on the wing.
Children fly on waiting swings.

Geese form squadrons in the air.
Narcissus bloom with scent fair.

And love finds a way to birth
to propagate the waiting earth.

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Danny Nunn March 30, 2010 at 6:52 AM A fun and enjoyable poem to read, makes one smile..good job..that on Pannochio..the guy is doing life without parole in a federal pen for smuggling a ton of cocaine, pretty well tells the story..thanks Danny

L'Nass Shango March 30, 2010 at 6:44 AM The ending couplet is astounding ... a genuine poem from a genuine poet. One love

Simone Segal March 26, 2010 at 5:10 PM Wonderful poem, love Simone

Mitch White March 25, 2010 at 12:27 PM Circle of life, sweet

James Marshall Goff March 24, 2010 at 6:51 PM yes, love does find a way in spring! good work! Deb! and how did you know pink was my favorite color?! you must have read my satirical poem "fear of not loathing!" jamesy

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 24, 2010 at 3:35 AM Beautiful! I bought some work eggs from"Gardents alive" in hopes of having more of those squiggly, wiggly crawly things. So, I has a pleasant smile when reading this poem. Love the title, too. Smiles, Dane Ann

Susan Palli March 23, 2010 at 10:46 AM Wonderful words, can feel the oncoming spring!

Amy Green March 23, 2010 at 8:17 AM Really liked this one, especially this line "Wiggly squirmy fidgety Spring The robin’s worms the crawling things."