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Fidgety Spring

Wiggly squirmy fidgety Spring The robin’s worms the crawling things. A swarm of ladybugs on the wing. Children fly on waiting swings. Geese form squadrons in the air. Narcissus bloom with scent fair. And love finds a way to birth to propagate the waiting earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/30/2010 6:52:00 AM
A fun and enjoyable poem to read, makes one smile..good job..that on Pannochio..the guy is doing life without parole in a federal pen for smuggling a ton of cocaine, pretty well tells the story..thanks Danny
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Date: 3/30/2010 6:44:00 AM
The ending couplet is astounding ... a genuine poem from a genuine poet. One love
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Date: 3/26/2010 5:10:00 PM
Wonderful poem, love Simone
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:27:00 PM
Circle of life, sweet
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:51:00 PM
yes, love does find a way in spring! good work! Deb! and how did you know pink was my favorite color?! you must have read my satirical poem "fear of not loathing!" jamesy
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:35:00 AM
Beautiful! I bought some work eggs from"Gardents alive" in hopes of having more of those squiggly, wiggly crawly things. So, I has a pleasant smile when reading this poem. Love the title, too. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/23/2010 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful words, can feel the oncoming spring!
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Date: 3/23/2010 8:17:00 AM
Really liked this one, especially this line "Wiggly squirmy fidgety Spring The robin’s worms the crawling things."
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