Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Fidgety Fingers

Fidgety fingers twirl each jigsaw piece
above the puzzle, awaiting release,
willing her concentration to increase.

A smile tugs at the corners of her lips,
and as the occasional swear word slips:
giggling, she places her hands on her hips.

I chuckle, as she pretends to be mad:
and I reciprocate, looking so sad,
that she soon relents, whispering, "My bad."

The puzzle is the last thing on my mind:
to doubt her beauty, I'd have to be blind,
for she's gorgeous, with a perfect behind.

I realize just how lucky we are:
like two kids caught raiding a cookie jar,
in each other's eyes, the other's a star.

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Line Gauthier May 17, 2018 at 8:07 AM Sweet, Emile. Emile Pinet May 17, 2018 at 8:50 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your visit my friend, Emile.

Donna Roberts March 31, 2017 at 9:49 AM Beautiful Emile Pinet March 31, 2017 at 11:45 AM Thanks Donna, I appreciate your visit, Emile.

Teddy Kimathi March 29, 2017 at 7:00 AM Congrats Emile, for your well-deserved second placement, with this lovely piece!! ;-) Emile Pinet March 29, 2017 at 8:01 AM Thanks Teddy, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2017 at 7:58 PM this is really NICE, Emile. Glad I finally saw this one.BIG congrats on the win. Emile Pinet March 26, 2017 at 9:21 AM Thanks so much Andrea, I welcome your visits and appreciate your comments, Emile.

Roy Pett March 23, 2017 at 5:07 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile, a joy to read, Roy. :)) Emile Pinet March 24, 2017 at 9:53 AM Thanks Roy, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Jack Eldridge March 23, 2017 at 9:50 AM Nice! Congrats ?? JE Emile Pinet March 23, 2017 at 11:12 AM Thanks Jack, I appreciate it, Emile.

Kai Michael Neumann March 23, 2017 at 2:24 AM This is a wonderful write. Congratulations, Kai Emile Pinet March 23, 2017 at 11:13 AM Thanks Kai, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Deborah Burch March 22, 2017 at 10:45 PM Congratulations! Emile!! Wonderful and sensual (tactfully:)). Very smooth! Well done my friend!! Hugggs deb Emile Pinet March 23, 2017 at 11:13 AM Thanks so much Deborah, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2017 at 10:30 PM The sensuous tone makes this a beauty! Congrats, Emile, on your 2nd place win in my contest! :) Kim Emile Pinet March 23, 2017 at 11:16 AM Thanks Kim, it was my pleasure to participate in your contest with such talented poets. Emile.

Paul Callus March 20, 2017 at 4:35 PM You present a lovely, clever buildup to this pleasurable poem, Emile; mutual love and attraction are what help to make a relationship work. Regards // paul Emile Pinet March 20, 2017 at 5:36 PM Thanks Paul, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.

Nette Onclaud March 20, 2017 at 1:47 PM awhh, how sweet is this love connection, emile... doing things together heightens a relationship's bond... your artwords inspire.. huggs Emile Pinet March 20, 2017 at 3:45 PM Thanks so much Nette, I truly appreciate your support, Emile.

Darren White March 20, 2017 at 12:42 PM Such precious moments indeed :) Ther;s so much love in your words, it makes me smile. Emile Pinet March 20, 2017 at 3:44 PM Thanks Darren, I appreciate your support, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 6:19 AM - Sometimes we forget to enjoy what we have - it is important to look at the "stars" and enjoy the moments - A beautiful poem, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Emile Pinet March 20, 2017 at 8:20 AM Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your continued support, Emile.

Carol B. March 19, 2017 at 10:17 PM Precious indeed Emile! Loved this :) Emile Pinet March 20, 2017 at 8:19 AM Thanks Carol, I appreciate your support, Emile.