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Fiddler's Love Song

The fiddler crab plays as he eats
A high pitched tune, around the dunes
A fast rhythm most can repeat
The fiddler crab plays as he eats
All can play a song so sweet
Fiddling to their love songs at noon  
The fiddler crab plays as he eats
A high pitched tune, around the dunes

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Funom Makama

February 16, 2015 at 12:47 PM

This is beautiful and nicely crafted. Thanks for the share... Sometimes its refreshing visiting old poems of soupers... Its amazing, the freshness which comes from doing this... And that is exactly my enjoyment visiting this piece

Joe Maverick

November 2, 2014 at 2:03 AM

Hello Sara, how well you wrote this one, a serenading crab..' take care..'

Jack Horne

October 26, 2014 at 10:32 AM

would love to hear this, Sara - this must be something you've heard and seen at your creek?

Leon Enriquez

October 24, 2014 at 10:45 PM

Dear Sara: Enjoyed this poem. Sounds better when read out loud. All the best, Leon.

Russell Sivey

October 24, 2014 at 9:56 PM

I really loved reading this illustrious write this evening! You have delighted me with your very spectacular poetry again! I see a pattern here with your triolets, very creative! I like this one better than your other one that your wrote later! But the other one was awesome too, just that I like this one better! What a grandiose piece! Great Work!!