Fickled

As cool raindrops caress red leaves
And waterdroplets cling
Clouds shade red berries of the dogwood
Formed in early spring

Fall makes a big splash, rains all day
Soon will come October's cold
But who knows what fickled fall will
bring, cloudy? sunny bold!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Curtis Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 3:56 PM
Well you never know, what the weather or the mailman will bring, well done Sara
Godwin Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 10:13 AM
Oh, those pesky words - how they want to be remembered! Still love the poem, and now the flow. You made me laugh, I didn't fall, I'm okay and the poem is great ... CayCay
Godwin Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:09 PM
Hey, Sara - good to find you on the new poem page - my 1st visit there all week. Very pretty w/ great rhyme - I tripped a little over the last 2 lines, but re-read. I enjoyed your poem ... CayCay
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 5:07 AM
I hope that you did not fall..By the way I left out the word fall..LOL..Sara
Cwiak Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 12:33 PM
Wonderful words, Sara. I love the red berries of the Dogwood.
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