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Fickle Weather

******** winters back is broken, i speak to soon, fickle weather? from sun to snow how many times? early spring upset, and wanting! summer knows its time will come soon enough, it waits, patient. ******

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/16/2018 7:34:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful and captivating Mick. Enchanting imagery expresses an enthralling Sijo. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/16/2018 9:33:00 PM

Thank you Dear Susan, I could do with warmth right now, our thermostat has gone like the weather, fickle... Brr.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/16/2018 12:07:00 PM

what a lovely descriptive poem I love the winters back is broken line and then the turn around when the weather is so unpredictable. We have more snow forecast - what has happened to spring!:-( hugs Jan xx

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/16/2018 4:29:00 PM

Thanks Jan, Yes! What's going on eh? hugs Mick