Fickle Weather

******** winters back is broken, i speak to soon, fickle weather? from sun to snow how many times? early spring upset, and wanting! summer knows its time will come soon enough, it waits, patient. ******
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Ashley Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Absolutely beautiful and captivating Mick. Enchanting imagery expresses an enthralling Sijo. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Talbot Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thank you Dear Susan, I could do with warmth right now, our thermostat has gone like the weather, fickle... Brr.
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 12:07 PM
what a lovely descriptive poem I love the winters back is broken line and then the turn around when the weather is so unpredictable. We have more snow forecast - what has happened to spring!:-( hugs Jan xx
Talbot Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Thanks Jan, Yes! What's going on eh? hugs Mick
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