Fghter's Last Words

my body is cold
i will be bold
and tell what i feel
maybe these wounds will heal

i feel fear
my death is near
i feel love
i want to fly above

these are my last words
so let them heard
let me fly
i'm sorry goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 22, 2011 at 10:59 AM
a nice soliloquy dennis .. trying to picture a boxer like Rocky Balboa saying them.. so many professional fighters must feel this exact emotion your lines present .. awesome luv..
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