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Fervent Surge

Pecks from lilac lips, Kiss the setting of the sun: Lavender waters.

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Date: 10/7/2010 7:28:00 AM

This is so sweet and sensual. I love it. Love Scarlett

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 8/21/2010 3:36:00 AM

beautiful!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/20/2010 3:50:00 PM

Lovely words Raul.. can we look forward to some great Haiku contests coming up soon? ciao..

Sammy Shaq

Date: 8/19/2010 11:25:00 PM

A lovely Haiku indeed, an imagery of beauty and a scenery of imagination and creativity. Simply put my fellow poet Raul, it's beautiful. Keep smiling, Sami.

Diiamond Rich

Date: 8/19/2010 8:48:00 PM

Enjoyed this poetry this evening and definantly read from you. Have a great night.:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2010 3:35:00 PM

Excellent..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/19/2010 1:02:00 PM

Ahh....I almost missed this beauty!! Lovely haiku, as always!! :) (soup mail for Raul!)

Diiamond Rich

Date: 8/19/2010 8:18:00 AM

Enjoyed this interesting piece of poetry you have written here. Also, will have to read more of your work as well. Have a great day

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2010 4:05:00 PM

Reads like a beautiful sunset that I could have enjoyed.. Suppose to meteor showers tonight starting around midnight for several hours..Best time of the year to see them so it said on the inter...Look to the northern sky..Sara

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 8/11/2010 4:20:00 PM

Hi Raul! A fine HAIKU... lovely language and vibrant imagery. Well done, my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/11/2010 12:55:00 AM

Hi Raul :) Very nice imagery you have here, Definitely enjoyed each line and of how you both have lilac & lavender in your 1st & 3rd lines-- & it's so nice to be able to see you here again :) have a great week! -- nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/10/2010 6:27:00 AM

Raul, this is absolutely beautiful. It is wonderful to be reading a new post from you. I wonder where you are and why you are not writing and sponsoring contests. I hope you will be here writing more as I truly enjoy your writing. Love, Carol

De R

Date: 8/10/2010 1:58:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, beautiful haiku, Raul..."lavender waters'...sweet write..Emily

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/9/2010 11:49:00 PM

sounds romantic and spiritual...

Sarah Hales

Date: 8/9/2010 11:40:00 PM

so sweet sarah x