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Heart desires seeks, even as we weep. Cyclic pain and joy, as ordained, does wax and wane, immersing us in fear, for we know not when, Gods gifts are taken back. 08-June-2021 Waltz wave contest poetry contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman A Waltz Wave has 19 lines with a syllable count of: 1,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,3,4,3,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,1.

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Date: 6/28/2021 5:17:00 AM
Unseeking Seeker, Imaginative and insightful work with first class flow. Congratulations. Your review of my entry is greatly appreciated Howard
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Date: 6/28/2021 7:05:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Howard!
Date: 6/26/2021 1:49:00 PM
Great flow and I like the analogy of life to a ferris wheel. I do disagree about God taking back His gifts. I agree with Victor on that. But each one has his own beliefs. Congrats on your win in my contest, Unseeking Seeker! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/26/2021 7:37:00 PM
Life breath, Kim … is it not taken back? Inspirations … sometimes flow, at other times, blocked; it goes on, moment to moment, inhale into fullness, exhale to voidness. ~ thanks for hosting such a delightful contest, Kim and for the recognition!
Date: 6/8/2021 8:10:00 PM
God's greatest gift is to give and give. He does say we will suffer on this earth but our days are numbered and if we believe and serve our Lord, everything he has to give is ours. God bless!
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Date: 6/8/2021 10:59:00 PM
Magnification of pain (as opposed to joy) by mind is suffering, hence optional.
Date: 6/8/2021 6:53:00 AM
God never takes back what is given to us. But we can reject what is given.
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Date: 6/8/2021 7:38:00 AM
Everything external is ephemeral Victor, is it not?
Date: 6/8/2021 2:35:00 AM
Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:32:00 AM
Thank you, Regina!

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