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Ferris Wheel

The electrifying ferris wheel ride Make my mind spinning around This foolish heart beating like drums I feel weak with your charms And I can no longer hide With you, I feel safe and sound. One minute I am thrilled on top The other minute I am falling under Till this excitement came to a stop Until now, I am still amazed by its wonder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/8/2019 7:10:00 PM
"One minute I am thrilled on top The other minute I am falling under" -this sounds like a heart that is constantly in stress mode, wondering whether she will be excited or in despair. Nicely done.
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Jessica Alvero
Date: 10/27/2019 6:31:00 AM
Thank you so much. Now I feel more motivated. I don't socialise much so this is how I express my thoughts.

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