Ferris Wheel

The electrifying ferris wheel ride
Make my mind spinning around
This foolish heart beating like drums
I feel weak with your charms
And I can no longer hide
With you, I feel safe and sound.
One minute I am thrilled on top
The other minute I am falling under
Till this excitement came to a stop
Until now, I am still amazed by its wonder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 7:10 PM
"One minute I am thrilled on top The other minute I am falling under" -this sounds like a heart that is constantly in stress mode, wondering whether she will be excited or in despair. Nicely done.
Alvero Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 6:31 AM
Thank you so much. Now I feel more motivated. I don't socialise much so this is how I express my thoughts.
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