Feral Dance

The human form so slightly alters
And tells a tale of times gone by
Even when the voices decry
Our spirit never falters.

Spinning with each turn of the globe
Dancing forms are changed
Some may say we become deranged
As our skin begins to disrobe.

Feral creatures control the floor
Our hackles raised as we dance
Giving ourselves to our trance
Two legs shift to four.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Oimbo Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 10:26 PM
the rhyme is real and i like the rhythm of the poem
Smith Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 8:14 AM
gorgeous gorgeous GORGEOUS poem. 7/7 for sure :)
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February 6, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Thank you so much! I'm so glad I'm one of your favourites! :D
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February 6, 2011 at 11:15 AM
You are going into my FAV. POET slot... wow, look forward to more of you work, and thanks for supporting my contest
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February 6, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Wow beautiful poem! The imagery is intense!
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