Notes About The Poem

Femme Fatales

When Mother Earth, Anu was young
the gods gifted her sisters;
Fair Brigid with the fiery hair,
blonde Boann of the waters.

Their bodies lay upon the globe
intertwined in rainbows
Brown skinned mountains, fiery skies,
and blonde washed dawns to rouse.

Adore the feminine in all her forms,
or mountains rise and snowslides are born.
Adore the feminine in all her forms.

Most favored by the Northern gods 
was Brigid's aurora
How the endless night was blessed
so they all adored her.

The jealous day of blonde Boann
shook, from pale limb to limb, 
and water rose to wake Anu
who writhed in earthen skin.

Adore the feminine in all her forms,
or mountains rise and snowslides are born.
Adore the feminine in all her forms.

The Northern lands of ice and snow
so brightened by Brigid
saw brittle glaciers break and fall
avalanches begin.

So to this day all North men pray
to the goddesses three
Earthen Anu, fiery Brigid
and Boann's watery lea.

Adore the feminine in all her forms,
or mountains rise and snowslides are born.
Adore the feminine in all her forms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:46 PM
DG, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Thank you Linda.
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 10:53 AM
I love the picture and your narrative Debbie!!! I am also glad that we are together in the first issue of the tanka journal!!!! Congratulations to your well-deserved WIN!!! ^_^
Guzzi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 11:31 AM
OHHHH wow Tim, Teddy, Chatmaine & me! You should do a blog and let everyone know!
Anderson-Throop Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Bold mythical imagery--the repetition of the lines: Adore the feminine in all her forms, or mountains rise and snowslides are born. Adore the feminine in all her forms." is effective. Well done!
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Debbie, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
Haight Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 9:13 AM
Wonderful take on the theme, Debbie. I really enjoyed the imagery here. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 10:35 PM
Congrats on a fine win Debbie
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:33 PM
Oh my, Deb, you went deep into the meaning and this should have placed on the top of the list. As always, you set the bar high !!
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Just down a different path Carrie I enjoyed all the submissions especially yours and Peter Holmes ;).
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Very beautiful as always Debbie , your discriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve
Lindley Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 10:07 PM
My Viking roots say this is a superb poem my friend. So smooth and such images! A7 and the title so fits the piece!
Gray Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 9:56 AM
Hi Debbie - Enjoyed very much!.
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Love seeing you take on a ballad. It's a great refrain, Debs. Adore the feminine. RIGHT ON
Pinet Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 12:38 PM
You have painted a picture with words that inspire, educate and captivate the reader with tales of mythical beauties. Emile. #7
Shaw Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 10:58 AM
Hi Debbie! Excellent poem. I really enjoyed reading it, and learned some history at the same time! love & hugs, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 11:50 AM
only the names are real from Celtic/Irish Mythos THANKS
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