Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Felix Culpa

The Fall necessary for redemption
Exodus needed to reach Promised Land
The Cross before glory resurrection
Sometimes, evil's allowed by God's command

We need to fall to rise again 'bove pain
"Failure is the stepping stone to success"
If we do not commit mistakes, no gain
Sometimes, we don't learn lessons without mess

So, count yourself fortunate if you fall
"A just man falls seven times and rises"
Hurdles in the way won't cause your downfall
For Phoenix, out of ashes, arises. 

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Edward Ibeh April 7, 2025 at 4:44 AM Joanna, a beautiful poem with a message that resonates. I love it. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!

Victor Buhagiar March 14, 2025 at 11:30 AM How compassionate God is. Man falls and is punished. Yet immediately, God gives hope that man can rise again.

CayCay Godwin March 14, 2025 at 11:28 AM Greetings, sweet Joanna. "A just man falls seven times and rises" - where does that quote come from? I wish I had known I only needed to do it 7 times, I'm kidding. No, I'm not. I totally agree with your point of view as it is part of mine, too. Without pain, some would never call His name. You wrote a quality poem with a great message. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Daniel Henry Rodgers March 13, 2025 at 12:02 PM Dear Joanna, You really inked the paradoxical concept of the fortunate fall. I just loved how your verses eloquently mix together biblical allusions and spiritual insights about growth through adversity. Your artistic words show that setbacks can lead to greater strength and wisdom, offering a hopeful perspective on life's challenges. Amen, my Sister!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel