Home » Poems » L Milton Hankins » Feisty Feline

Feisty Feline

sleek ebony coat luminescent golden eyes magic in motion written April 4, 2022 for "Black Cat Haiku" poetry contest sponsored by Robert James Liguori

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/5/2022 10:41:00 AM

ah, I can see her now with her glistening all-knowing cat eyes!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/5/2022 11:09:00 AM

Beautiful cat. Yes, all-knowing. She is the queen of her domain!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/4/2022 7:03:00 PM

Love your haiku, Milton. Word choice - Brilliant!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Mala. I appreciate your read and your thoughtful comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/4/2022 5:45:00 PM

Love that 'magic in motion.' Pretty slick. ~ Sleek

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 7:21:00 PM

Thanks, gw. Occasionally I write a line or two even I think is good!

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/4/2022 5:16:00 PM

I could totally picture this kitty!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 7:24:00 PM

Ah, Jenna, then I succeeded! Thanks.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 4/4/2022 4:13:00 PM

There is just something about a pure black cat, Milt's, and this Haiku describes it pawfectly . . . : )

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 7:27:00 PM

Aw, thanks, Indiana. I did try. Sometimes I get something purrfectly; other times, not so much!