Feet On the Ground

Im sorry Lord

I cut are trust with a sword

and lefted without saying a word

My mistake start to burn

I look left and right

I dont know where to turn

Plz tell me why im in love with the world?

I still wonder why i gave it up for that girl?

Why em i against the world?

This hell like war zone

I rather die alone

because i was born with a heart that stays cold

I would easily trade your heart for gold

and spend it on the girls on the pole

What is sad that i aint joking

I got many probelms so can i start drinking and smoking?

I spent my last life token

and thats when i awoken

Im already dead so the dead just spoken
.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/12/2011 6:33:00 PM
Congrats Mario on your win with this beautiful poem...
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:56:00 AM
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:19:00 PM
Mario congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;)
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:56:00 AM
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Date: 6/12/2011 12:02:00 PM
MARIO~Congratulations 4 this wonderful entry!!!! Thank you once again, I'm always honored to have you support any of my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:56:00 AM
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:42:00 AM
This sure comes across as such a heartfelt write for me... congrats on your win, Mario :D
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:20:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Mario
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:13:00 AM
Congrats Mario on your wonderful win in PD's contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy top ten victory with luv..
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