Carol Mitra Poet Verse

Feelings Tableau

Upon deep dark sky
Orange clouds appear
I look up in awe
Flashing scars open
To colour my pain
Bringing quiet rain




27.03.2021
Photo no.6
5 syllables per line
Sponsor: Joseph May
Tableau 2- First Place

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Darlene De Beaulieu April 10, 2021 at 11:11 AM Hello Carol Mitra, listening to the rain is soothing and quiet for the soul. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu April 11, 2021 at 11:01 AM I will Carol. Enjoy your weekend my friend. Carol Mitra April 10, 2021 at 6:51 PM Thank you dear Darlene...much love...Enjoy the weekend my friend :)

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2021 at 10:07 AM so glad you got a top win. Congrats Carol Mitra April 2, 2021 at 7:36 PM Thanks dear Andrea....much love..take care and have a blessed Easter :)

Beata Agustin March 31, 2021 at 11:39 PM Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you. Carol Mitra April 2, 2021 at 7:37 PM Thanks dear Beata....much love take care :)

Eve Roper March 31, 2021 at 9:36 PM Great imagery, Carol, congratulation on you win. Have a nice Easter. Eve Carol Mitra March 31, 2021 at 11:19 PM Thank you dear Eve...you too have a lovely Easter...much love :)

Kim Merryman March 31, 2021 at 2:32 PM A beautiful picture, Carol! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Carol Mitra March 31, 2021 at 5:42 PM Thank you dear Kim....much love..Take care :)

Sam Kauffman March 31, 2021 at 9:16 AM Beautifully done Carol - so visually vivid, full of bold imagery. Congratulations on your top win! Carol Mitra March 31, 2021 at 9:58 AM Thanks dear Sam...much appreciated..Take care :)

Krish Radhakrishna March 31, 2021 at 5:41 AM very nice’ to colour my pain! I liked that! Congrats on your win! Carol Mitra March 31, 2021 at 9:57 AM Thanks dear Krish....much appreciated...Take care :)

Joseph May March 31, 2021 at 4:54 AM Wonderful write Carol, Congrats on your win.. Carol Mitra March 31, 2021 at 9:55 AM Thanks dear Joseph....much appreciated :)

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2021 at 3:38 PM very expressive of feelings. I LIKE this a lot. Carol Mitra March 27, 2021 at 6:24 PM Thanks dear Andrea...much love :)