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Feelings Tableau

Upon deep dark sky Orange clouds appear I look up in awe Flashing scars open To colour my pain Bringing quiet rain 27.03.2021 Photo no.6 5 syllables per line Sponsor: Joseph May Tableau 2- First Place

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/10/2021 11:11:00 AM

Hello Carol Mitra, listening to the rain is soothing and quiet for the soul. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2021 11:01:00 AM

I will Carol. Enjoy your weekend my friend.

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/10/2021 6:51:00 PM

Thank you dear Darlene...much love...Enjoy the weekend my friend :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2021 10:07:00 AM

so glad you got a top win. Congrats

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/2/2021 7:36:00 PM

Thanks dear Andrea....much love..take care and have a blessed Easter :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/31/2021 11:39:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/2/2021 7:37:00 PM

Thanks dear Beata....much love take care :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/31/2021 9:36:00 PM

Great imagery, Carol, congratulation on you win. Have a nice Easter. Eve

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/31/2021 11:19:00 PM

Thank you dear Eve...you too have a lovely Easter...much love :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/31/2021 2:32:00 PM

A beautiful picture, Carol! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/31/2021 5:42:00 PM

Thank you dear Kim....much love..Take care :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/31/2021 9:16:00 AM

Beautifully done Carol - so visually vivid, full of bold imagery. Congratulations on your top win!

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/31/2021 9:58:00 AM

Thanks dear Sam...much appreciated..Take care :)

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 3/31/2021 5:41:00 AM

very nice’ to colour my pain! I liked that! Congrats on your win!

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/31/2021 9:57:00 AM

Thanks dear Krish....much appreciated...Take care :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2021 4:54:00 AM

Wonderful write Carol, Congrats on your win..

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/31/2021 9:55:00 AM

Thanks dear Joseph....much appreciated :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2021 3:38:00 PM

very expressive of feelings. I LIKE this a lot.

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/27/2021 6:24:00 PM

Thanks dear Andrea...much love :)