Feelings

Feelings of bewilderment Every thought and breath Echoing through my brain Leaving anxious tension Intensions good remain No matter what I say or do Grief to still prevail Sorry

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 1/7/2016 7:29:00 PM

Excellent acrostic David. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

David David
Date: 1/12/2016 4:11:00 PM

Thanks for the praise and welcome. : ]

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/6/2016 12:16:00 AM

Hi David, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

David David
Date: 1/6/2016 1:14:00 PM

Hi Linda. Thanks for the kind welcome and encouragement. I was apprehensive signing up and posting. Already glad I did. :)

Skat A

Date: 1/5/2016 12:37:00 PM

David,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

David David
Date: 1/5/2016 7:17:00 PM

Thanks for the welcome Skat A. Cheers