Feelings

Feelings of bewilderment 
Every thought and breath
Echoing through my brain
Leaving anxious tension
Intensions good remain      
No matter what I say or do
Grief to still prevail         
Sorry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Negron Flores Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Excellent acrostic David. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
David Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Thanks for the praise and welcome. : ]
A   Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:16 AM
Hi David, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
David Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Hi Linda. Thanks for the kind welcome and encouragement. I was apprehensive signing up and posting. Already glad I did. :)
A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 12:37 PM
David,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
David Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thanks for the welcome Skat A. Cheers
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