Feelings

I dont know what is going on
Life is so uncool
What the heck is wrong
Something is a miss
Something is truly gone......

The reason of my living seems to fade
There in an uncontrollable rage
I fear for the war in ma heart and mind
I was always known to be sweet and kind.....

The days have changed, I feel estranged
The tears are waiting to run down my cheek
The torture and pain makes my future looks bleak
There is a stillness that gives me fright
Lord only knows what has gone wrong or right....

I hope to see a spark of life
Panache,vitality, glimmer and desire
Far away from doubts and strife
Looking at a new day with bright sunshine
Hoping that we all will one day redefine
The reason of our living and our screwed up time.....
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Agustin Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 8:30 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 23, 2016 at 11:01 PM
FANCY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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