Feelings

The ultimate sensation and so pure, 
Skips a beat, uncontrollable, yet feels amazing,
Beating simultaneously - an intense magnetism
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Mehta Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 6:05 AM
Perfectly crafted Than-bauk, congrats on the win
Gregory Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 6:05 AM
Hello, just wanted to thank you for your kind words. I thought to read your writings and I found this one to resonate with me. Z
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 4:20 PM
This is an interesting form meant to be sung..I wonder what this sweet write would sound like to music? Light & Love
Khemlani Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Aww. Thank you Debbie. I wonder too, how this would sound like to music.
Duncan Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:20 PM
very nice words you got here ;}
Khemlani Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Thank you :)
Liwayway Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 11:16 AM
awesome poem Bhavna..thanks for sharing. have a nice day :)
Khemlani Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Thank you :)
Falotico Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Beautiful piece. Touching and warm. Hugs michael
Khemlani Avatar
November 25, 2012 at 1:21 AM
Thank you!
Poet Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 12:49 AM
Good one.But why the form is Than-Bauk?
Khemlani Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 1:08 AM
Thank you. Inspired by the Than-Bauk style of poetry. Added four lines :) but have made back to three lines.
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