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Feelings

The ultimate sensation and so pure, 
Skips a beat, uncontrollable, yet feels amazing,
Beating simultaneously - an intense magnetism

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Date: 11/13/2014 6:05:00 AM
Perfectly crafted Than-bauk, congrats on the win
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Date: 6/19/2013 6:05:00 AM
Hello, just wanted to thank you for your kind words. I thought to read your writings and I found this one to resonate with me. Z
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Date: 11/22/2012 4:20:00 PM
This is an interesting form meant to be sung..I wonder what this sweet write would sound like to music? Light & Love
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Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 11/25/2012 1:21:00 AM
Aww. Thank you Debbie. I wonder too, how this would sound like to music.
Date: 11/4/2012 4:20:00 PM
very nice words you got here ;}
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Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 11/25/2012 1:21:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/29/2012 11:16:00 AM
awesome poem Bhavna..thanks for sharing. have a nice day :)
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Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 11/25/2012 1:22:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/28/2012 6:30:00 AM
Beautiful piece. Touching and warm. Hugs michael
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Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 11/25/2012 1:21:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 10/28/2012 12:49:00 AM
Good one.But why the form is Than-Bauk?
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Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 10/28/2012 1:08:00 AM
Thank you. Inspired by the Than-Bauk style of poetry. Added four lines :) but have made back to three lines.