Feelings
FEELINGS
a
very
reflective time
unfolding
a strong
sense
of
being
cherished
nerves
raw
&
exposed
&
yet
sympathetico
co
to
intellectual
development
patient
desires
in
culturally
frank
innocence
&accomplished
receiving
chimed
rising
tides
on forgotten
times
CHALLENGES
a touchstone
so
familiar
its
beauty
falling
shadowing
the ego
a natural
rarity
in
a
perfect
range
of moods
sombre
to facile
to
illustrate
complling
connotation
of the
unconscious
sonorous
&imposing
a
cascading
momentum
in
exact
equivalence
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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