Feelings

I'M in desperate confusion
 when the times intertwine with my own life 
            pushed down desperate her live reminds me of mine
       alot of confusion and hatred despite my willingness to praying
          i'm trying to release all my sinning so my goals and dreams 
will become my  reality but my reality is her with another man and me beside her 
doing the rain dance in the bed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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