Feeling the Heat of It All

Drip drops of sweat falling down my face,
As earth revolves closer to sun and space...
                   I wonder
Boom bang sounds from the sky,
As the clouds part and began to cry...
                    I wonder
Ahhhh with a sigh of relief,
As I do the rain dance in the street...
                     I wonder
If he knows that for all these things I feel truly blessed,
For this is luxury in comparasion to the world which lies in total destress...
                      I wonder
Does he know just how GRATEFUL I AM non the less.....
                      I wonder.
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Brown Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Kibi. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Crasta Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 2:37 AM
lovely way to describe the rain...
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