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Feeling the Heat of It All

Drip drops of sweat falling down my face, As earth revolves closer to sun and space... I wonder Boom bang sounds from the sky, As the clouds part and began to cry... I wonder Ahhhh with a sigh of relief, As I do the rain dance in the street... I wonder If he knows that for all these things I feel truly blessed, For this is luxury in comparasion to the world which lies in total destress... I wonder Does he know just how GRATEFUL I AM non the less..... I wonder.

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Date: 5/27/2011 7:38:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Kibi. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2011 2:37:00 AM
lovely way to describe the rain...
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