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Feeling the Heat

Feeling the Heat (Senyru) Hot rays from on high moisture will pour from your skin cloths are ringing wet day time is longer sun will come up earlier tired from all the heat thirsty need water flowers and people need it exhausted by now

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Date: 8/21/2009 9:37:00 PM
Interesting view in this senryu series. The theme dealing with heat pulls this poem together line by line. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 8/17/2009 9:02:00 PM
Mary I do not know where you live but I live in South Texas and we have had 51 days this year over 100 degrees and are about 16 inches below normal rainfall. So say a prayer or two for us we are in desperate need of rain. God Bless, Ron
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Date: 8/17/2009 3:26:00 PM
Nicely expressed thoughts so many are having this summer. Keep writing. Sara
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