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Feeling Old

When the snails had zoomed passed the finish line,
When all that I owned, were no longer mine,
When they had taken my habits away,
When they stopped calling me gramps and say hey,
When I'm second fiddle caused by humming,
When ask "pass the salt", they think I'm bumming,
When sleep laying, sit or stand, I'm a putz,
When crunch my food, they say its teeth, not nuts,
When babies see pampers and yours they steal,
When butterflies fight could be your last meal
When hand points to lettered eye chart, what chart,
When old hits you, it aims for the best part.


Date: 08/29/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 7:46 PM
It hits hard, doesn't it? I've certainly felt it this year something awful. Thanks, WK! :) gw
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 4:52 AM
Yes, when growing old sneaks up behind us--we're never ready, ~ Aloha always William
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