Feeling My Pain

I’m feelen the pain 
and I’m hurten again
I’m somebody’s fool -here sitten on this bar stool
Tied to your chain

Bleeden like a hog
Getten drunk as a dog
I’m liven in a dream world- made up make believe world
Feeling my pain

Feeling my pain
Of loven you  again
Where I’m gona go now
How my gona stand now
while lying in  the pouren rain

Loves gone away
Pains come back to stay
I’m feelen the strain now
Hurten again now 
Feelen my pain

You’d said you’d be true
Not to make me a fool
But you slipped up again now- lied to me again now
Cause you’re the girl of my dreams

I can’t get away
You’re in my heart to stay
I’m liven in a dream world  - made up make believe world
Feeling my pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Flach Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 12:02 PM
Good luck with geeting this put to music, Mark. What an added pleasure to take this journey with your musically gifted son. I do feel the country-esque beat in this write. Let me know when I can hear it on You Tube. Joe
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April 8, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Sorry for your pain Mark, you have to fight for love.Very well written poem Mark. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Goodson Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 6:39 PM
I agree that one must fight for love too.This lyric poem has been put to music by my youngest son who is a music performer, He had challenged me to write him a country sad song. We love the country music we came up with to these lyrics. Hope to have it on YOU TUBE shortly.
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April 7, 2012 at 10:28 AM
The perfect "tear in your beer" country song! I enjoyed reading it. How nice that you and your son collaborate. I hope to see it on you tube soon. Blessings, Rhonda
Amadore Avatar
April 7, 2012 at 10:20 AM
An enjoyable song, indeed. I look forward to hearing/seeing the performance on YouTube....
Goodson Avatar
April 7, 2012 at 10:15 AM
Just a good old fashion "cry your heart out" "beer drinken song.This lyric poem has been put to music by my youngest son who is a music performer, He had challenged me to write him a country sad song. We love the country music we came up with to these lyrics. Hope to have it on YOU TUBE shortly.
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