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Feeling My Pain

I’m feelen the pain and I’m hurten again I’m somebody’s fool -here sitten on this bar stool Tied to your chain Bleeden like a hog Getten drunk as a dog I’m liven in a dream world- made up make believe world Feeling my pain Feeling my pain Of loven you again Where I’m gona go now How my gona stand now while lying in the pouren rain Loves gone away Pains come back to stay I’m feelen the strain now Hurten again now Feelen my pain You’d said you’d be true Not to make me a fool But you slipped up again now- lied to me again now Cause you’re the girl of my dreams I can’t get away You’re in my heart to stay I’m liven in a dream world - made up make believe world Feeling my pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/4/2012 12:02:00 PM
Good luck with geeting this put to music, Mark. What an added pleasure to take this journey with your musically gifted son. I do feel the country-esque beat in this write. Let me know when I can hear it on You Tube. Joe
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Date: 4/8/2012 6:30:00 AM
Sorry for your pain Mark, you have to fight for love.Very well written poem Mark. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/8/2012 6:39:00 PM
I agree that one must fight for love too.This lyric poem has been put to music by my youngest son who is a music performer, He had challenged me to write him a country sad song. We love the country music we came up with to these lyrics. Hope to have it on YOU TUBE shortly.
Date: 4/7/2012 10:28:00 AM
The perfect "tear in your beer" country song! I enjoyed reading it. How nice that you and your son collaborate. I hope to see it on you tube soon. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/7/2012 10:20:00 AM
An enjoyable song, indeed. I look forward to hearing/seeing the performance on YouTube....
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Date: 4/7/2012 10:15:00 AM
Just a good old fashion "cry your heart out" "beer drinken song.This lyric poem has been put to music by my youngest son who is a music performer, He had challenged me to write him a country sad song. We love the country music we came up with to these lyrics. Hope to have it on YOU TUBE shortly.
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