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Feeling Meaningless

A completely non religious write, I think! The universe is nothing yet everything, inward then outwardly led has tried every configuration possible, peanuts to stellar nursery beds Mixing this and that together, now it's growing inside our heads Bringing conscious thoughts to light, through our blood it spreads Perhaps a self centred entity, trying to comprehend from where it came Using every calculation ever made, from Confucius to murderous Cain Loves human ingenuity, though indiscriminate to the healthy and lame Lets everything run its course, including nazism and crack cocaine So what's the ultimate purpose, I mean time's always on its side, Expand forever, test every combination that human life provides Hanging around going nowhere, indifferent to watching us die Refusing to interact for a second, as we contagiously laugh and cry Well it's not good enough I'm afraid, to experiment at any price Allowing us to breed like rabbits, or are we your laboratory mice Chaos here, randomness there, fancy our chances, roll the dice Some gorge on filet mignon, others cannot afford a bowl of rice So the million dollar question I'm asking, everyone wants to know Are you listening universe, or is some god actually running the show Putting 2 and 2 together, is not beyond where my mind can go Answer's simple, but you constantly move the goalposts as I grow (Universe replies) Oh ye of little faith, (jesting) intelligent beings are in times of trial You've been looking for meaning, before my pharaohs ruled the Nile The truth is, there's none today, but that will all change in a little while Hang on in there, we're almost home, it's going to end in some style By David Kavanagh

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Date: 11/16/2021 12:25:00 PM
And through our blood it spreads David Universally feeling meaningless
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Date: 11/16/2021 1:44:00 PM
On the face of it Christopher it can be construed that way, as meaningless, but I really don't believe it's pointless, it serves the purpose of life, cause and effect, to what ends is anyones interpretation, perhaps this is mine at the moment, cheers David
Date: 11/15/2021 8:20:00 PM
David, you've written some beautiful poems. Your metaphor is lovely, and you have brought to light conscious notions. We feel like a tiny dot in the cosmos when we look around and see how swiftly this universe is expanding. There are many hazy things, but I don't believe that everything we see around us is the consequence of happenstance.
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Date: 11/15/2021 11:01:00 PM
Thank you Lasaad, I really have no idea, where the universe came from, but as a curious being I must question everything I see, in a different age I would've been classified as a heretic and dealt with (appropriately), however I am agnostic, and do not turn my back on any possibilities, I really go on what I feel and see, cheers David

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