Feeling Low?

Sometimes its okay to feel low,
it’s an ordinance of life
to make you acquainted of rife
that it is inevitably strident to grow.

It’s his expedient to steer you 
to see the life’s chronicle view.
See the vivid blue-sky,
be stance budding warrior it’s time to fly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Michaels Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 9:44 AM
Feeling somewhat low myself at the moment, this really struck a chord. "Evidently strident to grow" certainly makes me think. Thank you for sharing. Regards, John.
Agustin Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 5:17 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life."
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October 21, 2023 at 8:47 AM
You expressed this so well..
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