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Feeling like a jailbird

Open sky beyond hospital window
Feeling the austerity of that glass pane
Emancipation on the other side



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:49 PM
I felt that way, the one time I was in the hospital
Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 9:04 PM
I specifically remember a beautiful fall day looking out the cancer clinic window and thinking in there and out there were such polar opposites.
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