Feeling Free
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3/29/2025 for the now contiuum Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker
It's a warm breeze at my back
as I glide and sail.
Conscientious, constrained, I'm not.
I don't care if I pass or fail.
In my pleasurably empty mind,
(cosmic music I can see),
I'm profoundly unpurposeful.
I am feeling free.
Left or right, which way will I turn?
Right now, I don't even care.
As long as I have love to burn,
I'll know when I get there.
I don't know how long it will take
(scenic paintings I can hear),
or if I ever find my way back again,
because I have no fear.
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2025
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