Robert James Liguori Poet Rhyme

Feeling Free

I was walking through the marshes,               
When a turtle joined me.            
He said, "If you *jog* you will feel free."              

I was jogging at the field,             
When a mouse joined me.            
He said, "If you *run* you will feel free."            

I was running through the woods,                
When a squirrel joined me.            
He said, "If you *sprint* you will feel free."            

I was sprinting down the beach,               
When a pelican joined me.            
He said, "If you *walk* you will feel free."

2018

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Heidi Sands September 14, 2021 at 6:16 AM Oh my. ! This is great too! Another Fave for me. Have a nice day :) Robert James Liguori October 7, 2021 at 3:40 PM Thanks. Yeah, I made it circular and interlocking.