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Feeling Free

I was walking through the marshes, When a turtle joined me. He said, "If you *jog* you will feel free." I was jogging at the field, When a mouse joined me. He said, "If you *run* you will feel free." I was running through the woods, When a squirrel joined me. He said, "If you *sprint* you will feel free." I was sprinting down the beach, When a pelican joined me. He said, "If you *walk* you will feel free." 2018

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Date: 9/14/2021 6:16:00 AM
Oh my. ! This is great too! Another Fave for me. Have a nice day :)
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 10/7/2021 3:40:00 PM
Thanks. Yeah, I made it circular and interlocking.

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