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Feeling Down

I sink into this tranquil sea It’s silence builds and weighs on me I feel as though I cannot breathe Within these depths I sit and grieve There are no fish within this sea In fact, down here, is only me I think someday I’ll lose my mind And I’m afraid of what I’ll find Down here where I am on my own Down here where We are all alone Down here, within this tranquil sea Down here to keep me company

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/29/2018 2:31:00 AM
There is a delightful darkness and despair in this rhyme, Edward. It has a prettiness that is not easy to explain, but it appeals to the me-ness in me.
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