Feeling Blues

Cast
Down
Daily
Thoughts unflag
Life disappointments
Winning inner demons voices 
Replaying the same tune in the mind as a scratched disc
Leaving a deep feeling of unworthiness and rejection, toilsome to overcome










4-25-2016
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Carmack Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Nayda, I wish I could take your demons away. Remember, they are liars no matter how well they present their arguments.
Negron Flores Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Rob. Your words are very wise. I am feeling better. Thank you.
Tudor Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Toilsome indeed, are the blues. I fight these demons daily...I pray this is not true for you. J.
Negron Flores Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Thank you J. I will appreciate your prayers. Sadly, but this poem reflects how I am feeling actually.
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