Feeling Blues

Cast Down Daily Thoughts unflag Life disappointments Winning inner demons voices Replaying the same tune in the mind as a scratched disc Leaving a deep feeling of unworthiness and rejection, toilsome to overcome 4-25-2016

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Rob Carmack

Date: 4/27/2016 5:25:00 PM

Nayda, I wish I could take your demons away. Remember, they are liars no matter how well they present their arguments.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/28/2016 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Rob. Your words are very wise. I am feeling better. Thank you.

J. Tudor

Date: 4/25/2016 11:20:00 PM

Toilsome indeed, are the blues. I fight these demons daily...I pray this is not true for you. J.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/26/2016 6:43:00 AM

Thank you J. I will appreciate your prayers. Sadly, but this poem reflects how I am feeling actually.