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Feeling all grown-up

puffing on candy cigarette ~ blowing fake rings



AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:23 AM
I loved the taste of those candy cigarettes. MY mom depised them for just the implication of what they represented so I had to sneak around to get them. haha
Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 1:26 PM
She had a good point ! LOL
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Lol! ;p
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June 16, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Oh I love it! I remember "smoking" those Popeyes ;) the bubblegum pouch tobacco chewing too! As I try to quit cigarettes, again lol. Sweet haiku Line. xomo
Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:12 AM
OMG Maureen, I had never heard of bubblegum pouch tobacco - a dream concept for kids' candy !! LOL
Turner Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 11:12 PM
I certainly had my share. lol Great haiku, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 12:01 AM
They were good, weren't they! Thanks for joining me in the walk down memory lane, Daniel.
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