Feelin' Groovy

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The youngish woman danced to a rollicking tune
                        Up early at quarter till nine, exhausted now
                                       At half past noon
                            Leaning on her dance partner, 
                         her always close by faithful walker
                      Her long white hair damp with her dew
                            of dancing's sweet exertion
                       Music truly always was her very best
                                        excursion
                       She lied down on her couch to rest
                                  This 1960's rocker
                            A power nap, ah, getting old
                              is such a heavy bummer
                         Her nap leads to a sparkling beach
                        And the dreams of endless summer
                      Waking fresh within an hour the stereo
                                       Sings again
                     A gift she got in '65, is still a constant friend
                           Her fall had lead her to some pain,
                              But that won't stop this lady
                             She's feeling groovy anyway
                             She's barely turning eighty
                        For now, no this isn't me. This is just
                                         for fun....
                            But I'm still loving dance time
                                at a younger sixty-one  
                          A sweet Friday night sing along
                         Enjoying old fun songs we've sung
                        Rising in dance to yesterday's beat
                    Then melting in laughter, and taking a seat
                     I look to my future less two decades away
                    Hope I'm still dancing on my 80th Birthday
                            
                                   
                         
                                     ~ Psalm 30:11 ~
                                   King James Version
   "Thou hast turned for me my mourning into dancing: thou hast put off my   sackcloth, and girded me with gladness;"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/20/2021 5:51:00 PM
You're as young or as old as you feel. I'm 74 come October so the way I see it I'm 74 going on 47. Wonderful verse here bringing back some good memories. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/20/2021 10:52:00 PM
That is so true Judy! I was talking to my daughter's 84 year old friend today, she inspires me to NO end. There is no way she looks or acts old in any way, shape or form. She works out daily to her VHS videos from the 1990's, is in shape and cute as a button. I love being 'young' at heart :-) Thanks for stopping by Judy with your kind and encouraging comment <3 God bless you too!
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