Feel Through

I am a mess

confusion in my mind

I feel alone

I feel below
Below any realness of my soul

Call out for help

No hand reaches out

I am on my own, full of doubt
Cry's not heard or just ignored
Tear streaked cheeks,still no release


I wish i could

i wish i would

Just cut the pain,slice in deep
Until it bleeds in puddles on the floor
Reflect back what i am for

My heart is shadowed

My soul burned through

My mind a mess for what feel through
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Anonymous Avatar
August 5, 2011 at 1:26 PM
You certainly captured the raw emotion, well done!
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August 3, 2011 at 8:24 PM
very heartfelt poem i loved it
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 5:47 PM
Very nice write, introspective filled with deep thought.....with love...old Jack
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