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Feel the Fall

Sweetheart, We felt the fall in early June, love born of a Summer sun. By August, I was in your arms, life's best had just begun. Like falling leaves of Autumn trees throwing caution to the wind, you carried me like a gentle breeze to places I've never been. Weightlessly drifting in happiness I feel each sweeping rise, discovering our harmonies with breathless sweet surprise. I fantasize we stay adrift through life and time to recall how each new day through seasons of change we always felt the fall. Still falling in love with you, Jeannie

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Date: 3/27/2017 3:13:00 PM
to find the one is a constant dream for those that haven't, your poem speaks to those that have found the one in poetic verse...my first thought after reading your poem
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 3/28/2017 1:17:00 PM
Hi Frederic, thanks for stopping in. Loved our blog chat, see you around:)
Date: 1/17/2017 8:25:00 AM
I hope the fall doesn't skin your knees. I used to hate that when I was a kid:) Those damned strawberries hurt! Nice to see you posting again, Jeannie:)
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 1/17/2017 6:54:00 PM
Hello my friend, so good to hear from you. Somehow I knew if anyone left a comment, it would be you. Haven't been writing much poetry lately but my book is coming along nicely. Love to get your opinion on it before I begin the publishing process. There are few people who's opinion I respect more.