Feel the Accurate

God's wishes directed to human beings                          
                                after being born love evolves and rings
                                 the first teacher of that is the mother
                         before school she taught us at home by breasting 


                                     at the end of life if she survives
                               being a dead body see who tears highest
                                               feel the accurate
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Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 1:21 PM
- Life is a journey and we learn new things .... crying and comforting - What awaits around the next bend, no one really knows - A deep poem, bl ! - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Thanks a lot for your nice comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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