Feel My Words

If I can speak from the tip of my pen..
I would never sway or question when..

If my words had sounds as they went 
across your screen..
You could then feel with your eyes, and 
my emotions then can be seen..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jaye Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Wow great write can you tell me how long have you been writing poetry I really enjoy reading your work I am always going to reading your work I enjoy your writig your friend.
Guzzi Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 10:41 AM
short, sweet and a view of the true! Light & Love friend! [I put up a YouTube video to wish you Merry! go to God's Voice a poem by Debbie Guzzi]
Neels Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 11:10 AM
They are already embraced Mr. F no question about that.. Great write hun, love Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 5:13 AM
SOUP MAIL..MIchael...J.G.
Radke Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 12:55 PM
I love this poem, Michael. Such heartbreaking emotion in such few lines. This is a gift, to be able to write like this. Thank you. This is one of my favorites.
Devonshire Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 10:30 AM
We certainly have no problem seeing the emotion in this romantic poem, Michael. So beautiful! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 10:00 AM
It is the season to give thanks...I wish to thank you for your support and friendship this past year (2010) Michael. May you and yours have a wonderful Holiday Season and may the New Year (2011) bring you and yours good health, and may your hearts be overflowing with love and happiness. Love and blessings always, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Well this is a lovely intense and satisfying poem Michael as we can use our senses to encompass this exquisite delight u penned... feeling is such a part of loving.. and all the poets luv my White Knight of P.S. ... as your Jersey Girl forever and always does..
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Michael. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Peranteau Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 7:01 PM
A great write Sir ! And...your are speaking...I hear you ! much love, james
Kendrick Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Good one..I am glad that you shared this with us today...I was delighted that you found some good in my work..Sara
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