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Feeding the Ducklings

The child sits upon the new dock
Enjoying summer's air
Dipping her toes in the river
Sun reflects from fair hair

She's captivated by ducks swimming
In quiet blue waters
Unaware of previous tribes
Who lived here with daughters

Slowly she cast small crumb by crumb 
Her bread upon the sea
Thinking how much fun for the ducks
Floating quietly must be

The child in me joins her today
And sits upon the dock
Nothing reminds me of time
Nor will I look at a clock  

Inspired by Eve Roper's contest Feeding The Ducklings
Written: Saturday, May 28, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:52 PM
SARA, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
Rycroft Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Congrats well done xxx
Roper Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 11:12 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
Horsman Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Again you paint a wonderful picture with words,,
Muideen Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 4:02 PM
What a pretty piece, great..........A.M.
Onclaud Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 1:25 PM
captivating write and a winner for me, sara.. huggs
Sathasivam Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:44 AM
Excellent. Beautifully crafted. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
A   Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 3:29 AM
Sara, I did not see this on the list... However it is amazing... Luv Linda
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 11:47 AM
- A lovely day together with the sweet ducklings, Sara :) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Love your poem, Sara, and they way you wrote it as you and your child. It puts the reader right there in the moment too. Best wishes for the contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 9:22 AM
LOVE your take on it. I also enjoyed putting myself in the little girl's shoes.
Kendrick Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 9:51 AM
"I also enjoyed putting myself in the little girl's shoes.".."Twas fun thinking about joining her on the dock and feeding the ducks..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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