Feeding the Ducklings

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The child sits upon the new dock
Enjoying summer's air
Dipping her toes in the river
Sun reflects from fair hair

She's captivated by ducks swimming
In quiet blue waters
Unaware of previous tribes
Who lived here with daughters

Slowly she cast small crumb by crumb 
Her bread upon the sea
Thinking how much fun for the ducks
Floating quietly must be

The child in me joins her today
And sits upon the dock
Nothing reminds me of time
Nor will I look at a clock  

Inspired by Eve Roper's contest Feeding The Ducklings
Written: Saturday, May 28, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/17/2016 5:52:00 PM
SARA, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 6/7/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congrats well done xxx
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:12:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/3/2016 5:21:00 PM
Again you paint a wonderful picture with words,,
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Date: 6/1/2016 4:02:00 PM
What a pretty piece, great..........A.M.
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Date: 6/1/2016 1:25:00 PM
captivating write and a winner for me, sara.. huggs
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:44:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully crafted. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/31/2016 3:29:00 AM
Sara, I did not see this on the list... However it is amazing... Luv Linda
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Date: 5/28/2016 11:47:00 AM
- A lovely day together with the sweet ducklings, Sara :) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:22:00 AM
Love your poem, Sara, and they way you wrote it as you and your child. It puts the reader right there in the moment too. Best wishes for the contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/28/2016 9:22:00 AM
LOVE your take on it. I also enjoyed putting myself in the little girl's shoes.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/28/2016 9:51:00 AM
"I also enjoyed putting myself in the little girl's shoes.".."Twas fun thinking about joining her on the dock and feeding the ducks..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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