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The child sits upon the new dock Enjoying summer's air Dipping her toes in the river Sun reflects from fair hair She's captivated by ducks swimming In quiet blue waters Unaware of previous tribes Who lived here with daughters Slowly she cast small crumb by crumb Her bread upon the sea Thinking how much fun for the ducks Floating quietly must be The child in me joins her today And sits upon the dock Nothing reminds me of time Nor will I look at a clock Inspired by Eve Roper's contest Feeding The Ducklings Written: Saturday, May 28, 2016

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Date: 7/17/2016 5:52:00 PM
SARA, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 6/7/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congrats well done xxx
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Date: 6/5/2016 11:12:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/3/2016 5:21:00 PM
Again you paint a wonderful picture with words,,
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Date: 6/1/2016 4:02:00 PM
What a pretty piece, great..........A.M.
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Date: 6/1/2016 1:25:00 PM
captivating write and a winner for me, sara.. huggs
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Date: 6/1/2016 6:44:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully crafted. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/31/2016 3:29:00 AM
Sara, I did not see this on the list... However it is amazing... Luv Linda
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Date: 5/28/2016 11:47:00 AM
- A lovely day together with the sweet ducklings, Sara :) - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/28/2016 10:22:00 AM
Love your poem, Sara, and they way you wrote it as you and your child. It puts the reader right there in the moment too. Best wishes for the contest! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/28/2016 9:22:00 AM
LOVE your take on it. I also enjoyed putting myself in the little girl's shoes.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/28/2016 9:51:00 AM
"I also enjoyed putting myself in the little girl's shoes.".."Twas fun thinking about joining her on the dock and feeding the ducks..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

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