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Feeding the Ducklings


She is a princess sitting on her throne;
her subjects down below now make their way
towards waiting hands, for only them alone
she holds a prize she wants to give away.

They paddle towards her through the river flow
to the reward she holds for them to share,
for she is here most every day to throw
this sustenance to them with gentle care.

She is their princess, and to her, they look
with eyes intent on gifts within her hand.
So cute they are, like in a story book,
the ducklings come; they seem to understand.

The sun is bright and water ripples dance
as these sweet creatures visit her today.
There is an air of symbiotic trance...
they come, she feeds...all share a 'love buffet'.


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Feeding the Ducklings
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Judged: 05/30/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:47 PM
SANDRA, congratulations on your FEEDING THE DUCKY'S win. LUV **SKAT**
Rycroft Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on your win a lovely poem x
Eastman Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Loved this work. Very Interesting with that audio in play... Something new and different for sure. Congratulation on your well deserved win.
Selfa Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 6:27 AM
What an amazing work Sandra! I know you would win! Congratulations and keep on writing! :) -Hans
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 10:27 PM
It was so nice to hear you read this sweet poem Sandra. You have a pleasant voice. Congratulations on your deserving high placement in this contest! #7 ; )
Callus Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Thank you for a most lovely poem, Sandra. Like the ducklings I too am pleased to share in this delightful buffet. ~ Congratulations on yet another podium finish! ~ paul
Daniel Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 1:12 AM
Love the 'princess' take:) Congratulations on your placement, Sandra:)
Scars Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest lady :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Thank you again, Luloo! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Thank you so much, Jan. Yours was so precious too. Hugs, Sandra
Godwin Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:44 PM
One of my favs and I've practically read them all. I love that you did 3rd person instead of giving a child a college level vocabulary, and that you emphasis the scene from the child's imagination. Well done in form and content, Sandra ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, CayCay. There were so many good ones. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 5:46 AM
Beautiful write Sandra...GL in the contest
Allison Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 3:11 AM
Absolutely charming Sandra I agree with Andrea's comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Severo Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 11:11 PM
lovely poetry I like this so much, xoxoxox
Smith Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Sweet, gentle write, sure to do well in the contest. Good luck Sandra...
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 8:19 PM
THis is one of the best I have read so far, Sandra.Sure to be a great winner!!
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