Feeding the Demons

I must feed these demons that tear at my soul
For they hunger and thirst for my death
An offering of sorts, to appease and console
For they're lusting to covet my breath

The skin on my wrists begin to sigh
As the blade tries to comfort my veins
The death angel waits, he slowly draws nigh
Only a prayer for forgiveness remains

The demons rejoice in lieu of their prize
I can feel their claws holding tight
The darkness replaces the light in my eyes
I move farther away from the light

The floor turning crimson, the demons now drink
They grow drunk on this nectar of life
Death growing closer, he stands at the brink
And licks at the blood on my knife

My soul starts to question this thing that I've done
As it screams and begs me to wait
The time of my passing has slowly begun
I fear it's already too late

The demons devour my last will to live
And mercy fades away like a mist
I gave them a gift that no man should give
Though I probably won't even be missed


This is just poetry, I'm not suicidal....Kinda "Poe" ish....lol
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/27/2011 6:45:00 AM
Heavyhearted and distressing but an awesome piece, Larry. Great write. Ralph.
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Date: 3/25/2011 12:37:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Larry. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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