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Feeding Frenzy

a malus in fruit bearing tiny red apples tempting the parrots arriving en masse emerald green twenty eights in feasting frenzy
The "twenty-eight parrot" (Barnardius zonarius semitorquatus) found in south-west West Australia, has a black head, a green patch on the belly. Destroyer A Poet ~Contest Name any Haiku will do Margaret Foster: Sept 2011
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Zzzzz Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Nicely done.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Margaret, I'm glad you gave the footnote about the twenty-eight. I was thinking twenty eight parrots came along, and maybe they WERE 28 of them. That would make quite the feeding frenzy! Cute poems
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