Feeding Frenzy

Mermaid’s green pasty
black Caviar is tasty.....
shark was too hasty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Penton-Leccese Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Love the way that you rhymed every line. That is not always and easy task with a senryu. Lots of Love, ~Misty~
Falotico Avatar
November 19, 2010 at 2:42 PM
smart play with words, enjoyed...Michael
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