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Mermaid’s green pasty black Caviar is tasty..... shark was too hasty

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Date: 11/19/2010 8:38:00 PM
Love the way that you rhymed every line. That is not always and easy task with a senryu. Lots of Love, ~Misty~
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Date: 11/19/2010 2:42:00 PM
smart play with words, enjoyed...Michael
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