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Feeding At Dusk

marsh grass camouflages 
a great blue heron feeding~
      quietly at dusk
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Neumann Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 6:10 AM
A majestic heron. Kind wishes, Kai
Kauffman Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Hi Tania, We have a marine preserve off of a trail by our home. Your haiku captures the scenes of blue herons I have loved at dusk with their images reflected in the lagoons. Lovely haiku.
Kitchin Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 5:01 PM
Thank you Sam!
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 12:20 AM
Beautiful image Tania. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 4:49 AM
Thank you Tom!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 24, 2020 at 9:27 PM
The image expounds, and if it stood alone as versed, it would be just as fair -- Great job, Tania, Aloha!~@wk
Kitchin Avatar
January 25, 2020 at 4:48 AM
Thank you William!
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