Feeding At Dusk

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marsh grass camouflages a great blue heron feeding~ quietly at dusk

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/29/2020 6:10:00 AM

A majestic heron. Kind wishes, Kai

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/25/2020 1:02:00 PM

Hi Tania, We have a marine preserve off of a trail by our home. Your haiku captures the scenes of blue herons I have loved at dusk with their images reflected in the lagoons. Lovely haiku.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/25/2020 5:01:00 PM

Thank you Sam!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/25/2020 12:20:00 AM

Beautiful image Tania. Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/25/2020 4:49:00 AM

Thank you Tom!

Hilo Poet

Date: 1/24/2020 9:27:00 PM

The image expounds, and if it stood alone as versed, it would be just as fair -- Great job, Tania, Aloha!~@wk

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/25/2020 4:48:00 AM

Thank you William!