Norman Purvis Poet Narrative

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I find it not easy, to write this poetry.
The words come not easy to the pen.
I struggle with the rhyme.
Changing words all the time.
Lots I want to say.
But not today.
Living in a foreign land.
The language not understand.
Poetry is the only way.
I can have my say.
So if you can spare a word.
Of feedback, on my work.
I will be your friend.
To the end.

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If you see someone.
Who cannot speak your language.
Please make an effort.
To be extra nice to them.
The loneliness of being in a crowd.
And not understanding a word.
Is terrible. They look through you.
Not say hello, pretend you are not there.
The best feedback is constructive and critical.

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